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~ 发表于 2007-4-12 02:15

My New Teacher

My new teacher is my English teacher.Her Chiaese name is Su Lili.Her English name is Kelly.She's young .She's very pretty.She likes swimming,listening to music and playing basketball.Her favourite season is fall.Because she can take a trip.She likes tomatoes and fish .She is my friend.I love her and she love me very much!!</TD></TR>          <TR>

sylvia 发表于 2008-5-23 01:06

My new teacher is my English teacher.( 这句话可以省略) Her Chiaese ( Chinese) name is Su Lili( Lili Su).Her English name is Kelly.She's young (在句子很短的情况下,尽量不要缩写,直接说:She is young) .She's very pretty.( 和上句问题一样) She likes swimming,listening to music and playing basketball.Her favourite season is fall.Because she can take a trip.(因为两个句子有承接关系,所以要用逗号连接) She likes tomatoes and fish .She is my friend.I love her and she love ( loves) me very much!!

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