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micklei8 发表于 2007-4-12 02:15

个人经历一次不愉快的经历-An Unpleasant Experience

一次不愉快的经历<br><br><br>【内容提示】<br><br>你是一名女生。在你12岁时发生过一件不愉快的事情,请你把它按下列要点写成一篇短文:<br><br>①那是一个周末。妈妈给了你两张电影票让你独自去看电影;一张你自己用,把另一张卖掉,票价是两角。(因为你妈妈忙于家务,顾不上去。)<br><br>②你匆匆忙忙到了电影院。你把票拿在手上,寻找买票人。一个长得英俊的年轻小伙子走上前来,面带微笑要买你的票。<br><br>③问过价钱后,他掏邮一张10元的钱让你找,你不知所措。他说让你等等,他去电影院商店换钱。你左等右等不见他来,走过去一看,他进了男厕所。这时你意识到他骗了你。<br><br><br>【作文示范】<br><br><br>An Unpleasant Experience<br><br><br>沈青<br><br><br>It was during a weekend. Mum gave me two tickets for a film and told me she was too busy with the endless housework to go with me . She told me to keep the money if I could sell the extra ticket. I was very happy, of course . At that time , a ticket only cost 20 fen . But to me, a little girl of 12,20 fen seemed quite a lot.<br><br>I reached the cinema in a great hurry. Holding the ticket in my hand, I began to look for a buyer. A handsome young man noticed me and the ticket in my hand. He came towards me with a big smile, “You've got an extra ticket?”<br><br>“Yes,”I nodded .<br><br>“That's great . Say , how much?”<br><br>“Twenty fen.”<br><br>“ Oh ,”he thought for a while and then took out a ten-yuan note from his wallet.<br><br>“I'm very sorry, but I've only got this note.” Seeing I was confused① , he added, “Then, how about waiting for a while and I'll give you the money after I have changed it in the cinema's store?”<br><br>Without much thinking, I agreed. Then we went to the cinema together. He walked fast. I could hardly keep up with him. By and by, he left me further and further behind. Soon he disappeared in the Gents②. I stood there without knowing what to do. Suddenly I seemed to realize the handsome young fellow had cheated me. He had saved twenty fen, but lost his honour.<br><br><br>(选自《英语学习》1991年第12期)<br><br><br>【词语解释】<br><br>① confuse[k+n'fju:z] v.把……弄糊涂;使慌乱<br><br>②Gents 男厕所<br><br><br>【写法指要】<br><br>1)本文是一篇叙述过去某时发生的一件事的文章,所以我们把它称为过去记叙文(past narration)。文章通过叙事和对话,把人物的活动描写得活灵活现,我们好像在看一段电影剪辑。<br><br>2)文中有不少体现人物性格的好的表达,如“in a great hurry”,“with a big smile”,“That's great. Say, how much?”,“without much thinking”,“without knowing what to do”,“He had saved twenty fen, but lost his honour.”<br> <br></TD></TR>          <TR>

ui58sxdgcf 发表于 2007-4-12 02:24

很好啊.........

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