愉快的一天-A Happy Day
A Happy Day-愉快的一天<br> <br>【内容提示】<br>冬天里，一场大雪过后，大地积雪皑皑。这时，假如有人问你最愿意干的事是什么，你的回答十有八九是“打雪仗”。正好，有一个星期五的下午，下课以后你们老师走进教室建议第二天早晨你们上山玩打雪仗游戏，同学们齐声响应。请你把你们玩打雪仗的情况写成一篇文章。<br>【作文示范】<br><br>A Happy Day<br>Winter came and the first snow began to fall. It was early Saturday morning. When I got up and looked out of the window, I saw trees, roofs and the ground all covered with snow. The world seemed to be a vast expanse① of whiteness②. How beautiful!“A heavy snow, a rich harvest.”Peasants must be very happy. I was happy, too, because…. Well, let me tell you.In the previous afternoon, when school was over, our teacher came into the classroom. “Shall we go to the hill and have a snow fight?”she asked us with a smile.“Good!”the whole class shouted cheerfully.<br>That＇s why I was so happy in the morning.<br>When we got to the hill, we started making snow balls at once. Suddenly a snow ball hit me in the face. How cold! When I had made enough snow balls, I began to throw them at my“enemies”.<br>We threw snow balls at each other; we kept laughing and shouting. What great fun! We were children again. We did not stop enjoying ourselves until we could not see each other clearly for the dark.<br>On our way home, we were still talking about our snow fight. The wind was blowing hard, but we did not feel the cold. What a happy day!<br><br>（选自1988年4月19日《上海学生英文报》）<br>【词语解释】<br>①expanse[iks＇p$ns] n．广阔（的区域）；浩瀚②whiteness [＇waitnis] n．白；白色<br>【写法指要】<br>文章的引言段写到“瑞雪兆丰年”，农民高兴，自己也高兴。接着用插叙的手法写前一天下午老师的建议。第三段是过渡段。然后，四、五段是打“雪仗”的场面描写。结尾段写他们的兴奋劲，点题并与标题照应。</TD></TR> <TR>页:
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